Class Discussion, Room #1
Date
1/21/98
Start log: Wednesday, January 21, 1998 3:19:15 pm Virtual
Park Hall time --
JoeSa has arrived.
WendyFr has arrived.
WendyFr says, "Joe, are you here?"
JoeSa says, "yup"
JoeSa says, "How are ya?"
MaggieCa has arrived.
WendyFr says, "I printed out our papers so I could look at them easier"
MaggieCa says, "hello guys"
WendyFr says, "I'm good"
JoeSa says, "Hey Maggie"
WendyFr says, "Hey Maggie"
JoeSa says, "that's a good idea"
MaggieCa says, "what is today's plan"
WendyFr says, "we have to look at each other's papers and answer some questions"
WendyFr says, "whose do we start with?"
JoeSa says, "read Mr. Colesnote, Maggie"
MaggieCa says, "where is it"
WendyFr says, "read note 2"
JoeSa says, "Goood Wendy, Iforgot "
WendyFr says, "where have you been, Maggie?"
MaggieCa says, "I've been at home-- family emergency"
WendyFr says, "is everything OK?"
MaggieCa says, "no big deal, everything is fine now thanks for asking"
WendyFr says, "cool"
WendyFr says, "whose paper so we start with?"
MaggieCa says, "is his not on the web board?"
WendyFr says, "whose?"
MaggieCa says, "Mr coles"
WendyFr says, "Mr. Cole's what?"
MaggieCa says, "note"
WendyFr says, "you have to type read note 2, I think."
JoeSa says, "without the quotes"
WendyFr says, "yeah"
MaggieCa says, "it won't work"
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] Mr.Cole says, "Those of you having trouble reading the note board: type 'read 2 on note'."
WendyFr says, "that's it"
WendyFr says, "I've printed mine and Joe's out but I don't have Maggie's"
WendyFr says, "I'm gonna go get it now"
WendyFr says, "JOE, are you here?"
MaggieCa says, "where has Anand been?"
WendyFr says, "I have no idea"
JoeSa says, "Yeah but I was waiting on a printout"
WendyFr says, "good deal"
WendyFr says, "whose do we look at first"
MaggieCa says, "I'm going to print y'all's now be right back"
JoeSa says, "I've got your's so why dont we look at yours"
JoeSa says, "Wendy that is"
WendyFr says, "groovy, but be nice"
JoeSa says, "Okie Dokie"
WendyFr says, "Ok, what about it?"
MaggieCa has disconnected.
JoeSa says, "Hold on, I've got to gather my thoughts"
WendyFr says, "where is Maggie?"
WendyFr says, "give it to me straight, Joe"
JoeSa says, "She had to get a printout"
WendyFr says, "OK, start on my paper then"
JoeSa says, "OK, paragraph one looks good but you might want to reword the last sentence"
WendyFr says, "OK, let me take notes"
JoeSa says, "Dont listen to everything I say, because it might not be all good"
WendyFr says, "I want your advice though"
JoeSa says, "OK"
MaggieCa has connected.
JoeSa says, "I think Maggie got disconnected"
MaggieCa says, "i'm back"
WendyFr says, "she has connected again"
WendyFr says, "welcome back"
MaggieCa says, "thanks"
MaggieCa says, "i got"
WendyFr says, "we're discussing my paper"
MaggieCa says, "okay where are y'all"
WendyFr says, "Joe?"
JoeSa says, "OK, Par.2 you need a comma after Meusner says,"
WendyFr says, "OK"
MaggieCa says, "are we supposed to use "I" in these essays?"
WendyFr says, "I don't know, can we use first person?"
JoeSa says, "You also need to cite your quotes like this: "Blah Blah blah"(192)."
WendyFr says, "oh yeah, I forgot!"
JoeSa says, "It depends what assignment you are doing"
MaggieCa says, "usually in a persuasive essay it's better to state facts rather than your own opinion"
WendyFr says, "OK"
MaggieCa says, "it sounds better that way"
WendyFr says, "thanks"
MaggieCa says, "sure"
WendyFr says, "what else?"
WendyFr says, "hello?"
MaggieCa says, "i'm reading"
WendyFr says, "OK"
JoeSa says, "In your last sentence of par 3, does they describe "reasons" or "students?" "
JoeSa says, "I get what you're saying but Mr. Cole might not"
WendyFr says, "students"
WendyFr says, "OK, thanks"
JoeSa says, "par. 4 looks good from what I see"
WendyFr says, "OK"
JoeSa says, "I think you spelled embasil wrong"
JoeSa says, "Maybe or maybe not, I don't know"
WendyFr says, "my spellcheck spelled it like that"
WendyFr says, "I'll look it up, though"
JoeSa says, "Cool"
MaggieCa says, "in par. 5 maybe you should say "caught the attention of" or something along those lines instead of "reached out and grabbed" that sounds sort of like slang,Maybe?!?!? "
WendyFr says, "OK, groovy"
JoeSa has disconnected.
MaggieCa says, "in par. 7 loser is also kind of slang "
WendyFr says, "OK"
JoeSa has connected.
MaggieCa says, "the rest looks great to little ole me! just see about the 1st person thing"
JoeSa says, "Can yall hear me"
MaggieCa says, "now we can"
JoeSa says, "Cool, I got disconnected. "
WendyFr says, "OK, thank you so much. I'm glad I have smart people in my group"
WendyFr says, "welcome back,Joe"
JoeSa says, "Sometimes, I hate computers"
MaggieCa says, " i need to go reprint my own paper! be back"
WendyFr says, "me too"
JoeSa says, "thanx"
WendyFr says, "whose paper now?"
JoeSa says, "It doesnt matter to me"
WendyFr says, "Maggie or Joe?"
JoeSa says, "OK, Mine"
WendyFr says, "groovy"
JoeSa says, "Go ahead, gimmee all you got"
WendyFr says, "OK, I don't know but, are you supposed to have a paragraph with just one sentence?"
JoeSa says, "Is that allowed"
JoeSa says, "I think if it's an introduction, then it can be a sentence"
WendyFr says, "My teacher says no but that could be acceptable, I'm not sure"
WendyFr says, "That's cool then"
JoeSa says, "I'll ask Mr. Cole later, but thanks anyway"
MaggieCa has disconnected.
JoeSa says, "I guess Maggie got disconnected"
WendyFr says, "I think the first and second paragraphs look good"
JoeSa says, "again, that is"
JoeSa says, "OK"
WendyFr says, "I think she did, what's going on?"
WendyFr says, "but we'll continue with your paper"
WendyFr says, "I'm reading"
JoeSa nods.
WendyFr smiles.
JoeSa says, "Mine cant be that good!!"
MaggieCa has connected.
WendyFr says, "everything looks good to me but I'm not as smart as you two"
JoeSa says, "Hey again Wendy"
WendyFr says, "I can't find anything wrong but we can see what Maggie says"
WendyFr says, "hey Joe I'm still here"
WendyFr says, "I was reading"
JoeSa says, "I meant "hey again Maggie""
MaggieCa says, "my printer is down sorry it took so long"
WendyFr says, "Oh"
WendyFr says, "see if you see anything in Joe's paper, Maggie"
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] Mr.Cole says, "Try to wrap things up folks. I want to talk to y'all out here before we break."
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] ShannonMc has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] ShannonMc leaves for the Three.
WendyFr says, "can you see anything, Maggie?"
JoeSa says, "Ya'll ready to leave?"
WendyFr says, "sorry my paper took so long"
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] JasonOg has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] ShannonMc has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] FrankBl has arrived.
WendyFr says, "I guess we have to go"
JoeSa says, "Maggie, is your paper long enough?"
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] JenniferCa has arrived.
MaggieCa says, "Joe, it looks great. I'll keep looking and email you it y'all will do the same for me"
MaggieCa goes out.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] MaggieCa has arrived.
JoeSa goes out.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] JoeSa has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] ShannonMc says, "my computer froze"
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] KurtDa has arrived.
WendyFr says, "good deal, Maggie"
WendyFr goes out.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] WendyFr has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] AndrewGo has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] MaggieCa says, "thank y'all"
End log: Wednesday, January 21, 1998 4:19:12 pm Virtual Park Hall time --