Class Discussion, Room #3
Date
1/21/98
Start log: Wednesday, January 21, 1998 3:19:32 pm Virtual Park Hall
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JasonOg has arrived.
FrankBl has arrived.
JenniferCa has arrived.
ShannonMc has arrived.
FrankBl says, "how are ya'll doing"
ShannonMc says, "chillin"
JenniferCa says, "same as always"
JasonOg says, "hello my beautiful group"
FrankBl says, "did ya'll make a lot o corrections"
JasonOg says, "Are we all going to try to bring up the papers"
JenniferCa says, "i forgot to print them out"
ShannonMc says, "Idon't think I can bring them up"
FrankBl says, "I don't remember how but I got them printed out"
ShannonMc says, "if I try, I will get knocked off"
JenniferCa says, "i dont think i can either"
JasonOg says, "I'm going to give it a shot"
FrankBl says, "what is going on"
ShannonMc says, "let me try too, again"
JasonOg says, "I got it to work"
ShannonMc says, "won't let me"
ShannonMc says, "how did you get it to work"
JasonOg says, "I went under file and chose 'new web browser'"
JenniferCa says, "mine doesnt say that"
FrankBl says, "mine doesn't either"
JasonOg says, "try 'new'"
FrankBl says, "I don't have that either"
JenniferCa says, "it says new log"
JasonOg says, "I don't Know what to tell you guys"
FrankBl says, "it doesn't matter if I have them printed out does it"
ShannonMc says, "the only way I will be able to see them is if I close this out"
JasonOg says, "good point Frank"
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] Mr.Cole says, "Those of you having trouble reading the note board: type 'read 2 on note'."
FrankBl says, "we can't pull up te papers"
Mr.Cole has arrived.
Mr.Cole says, "problems?"
ShannonMc says, "we want to pull the papers up to discuss them but only one person can do it"
Mr.Cole says, "how are y'all connecting to the MOO?"
FrankBl says, "pueblo"
ShannonMc says, "arches"
JenniferCa says, "zMUD"
JasonOg says, "I'm going to look over Shannon's paper right now"
FrankBl says, "I will too"
Mr.Cole says, "OK, pueblo and zMUD are separate MOO clients. Frank and Jenny can look at the papers by launching their web browsers (Netscape or whatever) and running them simultaneously."
ShannonMc says, "wow...I feel so important!"
JasonOg says, "give me five minutes"
ShannonMc says, "I have revised it so some things are different"
Mr.Cole says, "Shannon, you may be out of luck for now, unless you can also establish a Netscape connection"
JenniferCa says, "ok, but how exactly do i do that"
ShannonMc says, "I have AOL"
FrankBl says, "Shannon do not start a sentence "But""
JasonOg says, "Shannon you need some commas in your first sentence"
JasonOg says, "Mr. cole, Kurt got cut off"
FrankBl says, "Jason I don't think she does"
Mr.Cole says, "Jenny, minimize your zMUD window and then launch Netscape or whatever you have."
JasonOg says, "I think she does"
ShannonMc says, "I told you guys I have revised it, and I put a comma in and I changed the sentence from starting with But.."
JenniferCa says, "ok...here goes"
JasonOg says, "Kurt is waiting for the next availabel computer"
JasonOg says, "sorry Shannon"
ShannonMc says, "but that is good that you guys caught it cause I didn't someone else who read did"
JasonOg says, "I'm going back now"
ShannonMc says, "where are you going?\"
Mr.Cole says, "Things under control here?"
ShannonMc says, "I don't know what's going on"
Mr.Cole says, "People are reading your paper"
FrankBl says, "I am reading your paper over again"
ShannonMc says, "thanks Frank"
JasonOg says, "Shannon, I liked your thesis"
ShannonMc says, "thanks"
Mr.Cole says, "Since you have AOL, you should be able to do what the others are doing: running your web browser and MOO client simultaneously"
FrankBl says, "Shannon in the second paragraph you might wnt to use a period instead of that semicolon"
ShannonMc says, "but I am connected through arches because it is easier"
JenniferCa says, "my file only says new log, is that what i use?"
Mr.Cole says, "Jenny, no I think that still belongs to zMUD. "
JasonOg says, "Shannon, so far I'm really enjoying it. You make a statement and then back it up, but try to put in some examples."
ShannonMc says, "ok"
ShannonMc says, "more examples would be good"
FrankBl says, "also you have reflectshow and you need to split it up in the third paragraph"
ShannonMc says, "where?"
JenniferCa says, "i cannot get it to work"
Mr.Cole grumbles.
JasonOg says, "Shannon, your paper is smart and well written, I'd give it an A"
FrankBl says, "The second to last sentence"
ShannonMc says, ""thanks Jason"
JasonOg says, "your welcome babe"
Mr.Cole says, "Jenny, come out to the main room with me for a sec."
Mr.Cole goes out.
ShannonMc says, "I see the mistake. "
JenniferCa goes out.
JasonOg says, "Jenny is in trouble"
FrankBl says, "Shannon look at the last sentence in the fourth paragraph it seem runonish"
FrankBl says, "other than that I like it alot"
ShannonMc says, "I am going to try "Should I put a period instead of a semicolon?"
FrankBl says, "I am not sure but it might be safer"
JasonOg says, "All I'm looking for in the papers in a thesis, topic sentences, ideas, and examples"
ShannonMc says, "I am going to try to pull you guys' papers up. It may knocked me off for a second though"
FrankBl says, "alright"
JasonOg says, "good luck"
ShannonMc has disconnected.
FrankBl says, "Jason I am going to your paper now"
JasonOg says, "just me and you Frank"
FrankBl says, "where did everybody go"
FrankBl says, "did you fix that last sentence in the first paragraph"
FrankBl says, "you also miss spelled colleagues? and togethet? in the third paragraph"
FrankBl says, "other than that it is a very srong and well put together essay without a conclusion"
FrankBl says, "are you still there"
JasonOg says, "hold on a second Frank"
FrankBl says, "alright"
The housekeeper arrives to cart ShannonMc off to bed.
JenniferCa has arrived.
JenniferCa says, "miss me guys?"
FrankBl says, "are you back for good Jenny"
JenniferCa says, "well unless i go to read a paper"
JenniferCa says, "so i have a question about my paper...wanna help?"
JasonOg has disconnected.
FrankBl has disconnected.
FrankBl has connected.
JenniferCa says, "what just happened?"
JasonOg has connected.
FrankBl says, "I don't know I just cut off"
JenniferCa says, "yall both did"
JenniferCa says, "what about shannon"
JasonOg says, "I got cut off too"
FrankBl says, "what did happen"
JasonOg says, "not a clue"
FrankBl says, "Jason did you catch all of my comments earlier"
JenniferCa says, "how strange....."
JasonOg says, "yes, and I have one for you"
JenniferCa says, "i like eerie things like that"
FrankBl says, "Jenny did you not get disconnected"
JenniferCa says, "nope"
JasonOg says, "In your conclusion, before your last sentence you were talking about the ineffectiveness of the essay, but your last sentence says that it was effective"
FrankBl says, "I will look at that thanks"
JenniferCa says, "ok, what about mine?"
JasonOg says, "Just a little confusing"
MiMa has arrived.
FrankBl says, "I am going to it right now"
JasonOg says, "so am I"
JenniferCa says, "i know...i am against it but i point out all the good ways he supports it"
MiMa says, "Jason, I am on MiAnne's computer. Arches won't let me back on"
FrankBl says, "Jenny in the second paragraph you say peoplehate and you need to seperate them"
MiMa says, "I am just going to read all of your papers and e-mail you guys with my ideas"
JasonOg says, "Is this Shannon"
MiMa says, "yeah"
JasonOg says, "ha ha"
MiMa says, "my friend is in this class too"
MiMa says, "she is right next door"
FrankBl says, "also in the fifth paragraph you need to capitalize professors at the begining of the sentence"
JenniferCa says, "wow everyone in my hall hates me and my roommate"
JasonOg says, "then how is she in class?"
JenniferCa says, "so, so far just typos"
JasonOg says, "Jenny, look on the bright side"
FrankBl says, "did you catch that Jenny"
MiMa says, "well right now I am just on her computer and I went into room 3. She was in room 4"
JenniferCa says, "yes frank"
JenniferCa says, "what bright side jason?"
FrankBl says, "other than small typos it was very well written"
JasonOg says, "I like you"
MiMa says, "I am going to try to get back on on my computer"
JenniferCa says, "you dont know me"
FrankBl says, "what does that mean"
JasonOg says, "So synical"
JenniferCa says, "and you shouldnt like people you dont know"
FrankBl says, "that is kind of harsh Jenny"
MiMa goes out.
JasonOg says, "Okay Jenny, the only problem I have with your essay is the intro"
JenniferCa says, "i view things harshly but realisicly"
JasonOg says, "The thesis doesn't seem to fit in"
JasonOg says, "back on subject Jen"
JenniferCa says, "i know, i said that before"
JasonOg says, "sooooooorry"
JenniferCa says, "i think its noneffective but i point out all the things that support the paper"
JenniferCa says, "i dont know what to do about that exactly"
JasonOg says, "you have to lead in to your thesis"
FrankBl says, "I think it is effective just kind of bland"
JenniferCa says, "bland......well"
JasonOg says, "we are just trying to help"
JenniferCa says, "i know, im not getting defensive"
FrankBl says, "I am sorry"
JasonOg says, "lets all take a deep breath"
JasonOg says, "ahhhhhhhh"
FrankBl says, "I agree"
JasonOg says, "don't forget Jenny, your our leader"
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] Mr.Cole says, "Try to wrap things up folks. I want to talk to y'all out here before we break."
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] ShannonMc has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] ShannonMc leaves for the Three.
ShannonMc has arrived.
JenniferCa says, "i lead you not"
JasonOg says, "its time to go Shannon"
ShannonMc says, "I am back"
ShannonMc says, "damn"
JasonOg says, "to late"
ShannonMc says, "did I say that"
FrankBl says, "I am taking off and you are a great leader"
JasonOg says, "bye guys"
ShannonMc says, "bye"
JasonOg goes out.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] JasonOg has arrived.
ShannonMc goes out.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] ShannonMc has arrived.
FrankBl goes out.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] FrankBl has arrived.
JenniferCa goes out.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] JenniferCa has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] MaggieCa has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] JoeSa has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] ShannonMc says, "my computer froze"
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] KurtDa has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] WendyFr has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] AndrewGo has arrived.
[Mr.Cole's Classroom] MaggieCa says, "thank y'all"
End log: Wednesday, January 21, 1998 4:19:19 pm Virtual Park Hall time --